Dead words are simply words which are so overused in the English language, they no longer have much meaning nor do they add any emotion to the work. Some people however are a little strict about their use, and they may mark your grade down for it in school. Check with your teacher on which words you can use because some of the ones on the internet are not really dead words. Sometimes it can be an opinion, like some of the words I saw while trying to find a list.
that
so
a lot
like
got
very
You might even see out there on the internet to never use the word "said". I am a not a strong supporter of using the word "said," but I don't think you should use it every single line. Spice up your writing with emotion words rather than using the constant "said," but don't over do it to where you never see the word "said". Sometimes, you don't even need dialogue tags, especially if it's a conversation or fight between two characters. The reader can keep track of who's saying what.
"That" tends to take away emotion from the subject or object of the sentence. It's easy to replace with who, whom, or which. In turn with each other depending on what the sentence demands.
"So" is commonly a passing of time, and if you're looking for word count, it's much easier to replace with a longer sentence. You can even cut it completely and no harm done.
"A lot" you know, I don't understand why this one is a dead word. I see nothing wrong with it. It simply expresses there is an abundance of something. Maybe they just want you to use fancy language.
"Like" this one gets irritable after a while. It's used for comparisons and saying if you have crushes on people. It's easily over used, I see nothing wrong with it in conversation or dialogue, but it's generally best to avoid.
"Got" I got a frog in my pocket. Replaceable with "have" or "received," same general use as the word "like."
"Very" usually in conjunction with the word "like," meant to rank importance on a certain subject. Use fancier language when not in dialogue.
Umbrella
Sunday, April 20, 2014
Not Speaking to the Reader
On of the hardest things a writer can face is not speaking to the reader. All writers have the natural tendency to try and turn their writing into a conversation. It's important to not do this. You are trying to get your point across and make sure your reader understands, but DO NOT SPEAK TO THEM. As the character or the writer, both are equally bad. Now you might be wondering how you speak to the reader, here are a few examples.
You know what I mean?
I bet even you have made this mistake at least once in your life.
Have you ever been in love? It sucks, I advise you to never fall in love.
I plead guilty to this, I really do. When I was a younger writer and just learning I never really thought how tacky it looked to address the reader directly. I am now embarrassed when I come across those little slip ups in my writing. I've spent a lot of time editing and I'm sure I'll have to edit more out eventually. Be careful to not let yourself slip into this habit.
You know what I mean?
I bet even you have made this mistake at least once in your life.
Have you ever been in love? It sucks, I advise you to never fall in love.
I plead guilty to this, I really do. When I was a younger writer and just learning I never really thought how tacky it looked to address the reader directly. I am now embarrassed when I come across those little slip ups in my writing. I've spent a lot of time editing and I'm sure I'll have to edit more out eventually. Be careful to not let yourself slip into this habit.
Who vs. Whom
"Who" vs. "Whom" ask yourself whether the answer would be "he" vs. "him." -Mignon Fogarty
Who connects to the subject (normally a person or character) and whom connects to the object. One of the reasons I love grammar girl however, she gives you quick tips on how to remember it. The quote up top? Remember it. The "who" connects to the "he" and the "whom" to "him." Pair m with m. M&M! Another thing to remember, is the subject is not always male, so remember the female counterparts "she" and "her" as well.
Quiz:
1. Who or Whom do you love?
I love her.
2. Who or Whom stepped on Pascal?
He stepped on Pascal.
3. Who or Whom has a crush on you?
She has a crush on you.
4. Who or Whom are you proud of?
I'm proud of him.
5. Who or Whom should we invite to the party?
We should invite him.
6. Who or Whom wants ice cream?
She wants ice cream.
Answers:
1. Whom
2. Who
3. Who
4. Whom
5. Whom
6. Who
Who connects to the subject (normally a person or character) and whom connects to the object. One of the reasons I love grammar girl however, she gives you quick tips on how to remember it. The quote up top? Remember it. The "who" connects to the "he" and the "whom" to "him." Pair m with m. M&M! Another thing to remember, is the subject is not always male, so remember the female counterparts "she" and "her" as well.
Quiz:
1. Who or Whom do you love?
I love her.
2. Who or Whom stepped on Pascal?
He stepped on Pascal.
3. Who or Whom has a crush on you?
She has a crush on you.
4. Who or Whom are you proud of?
I'm proud of him.
5. Who or Whom should we invite to the party?
We should invite him.
6. Who or Whom wants ice cream?
She wants ice cream.
Answers:
1. Whom
2. Who
3. Who
4. Whom
5. Whom
6. Who
Active and Passive Voice
To be completely honest, I still don't understand this topic. We'll both be learning something new today!
Active= the subject of the sentence is "acting"
Passive= the subject and target of the subject switch positions
I'm always told to write with an active voice in essay's, who knows if I've managed it. I asked a bunch of people if they knew of a way to quickly describe it to get it through a lot easier, turns out, they didn't even know there was Active vs. Passive. This obviously shows how much of a problem it is in English. *whispers* I blame the teachers.
Here's a few examples to try and help:
Active:
I threw the ball.
Tricia loves Frodo.
The 16th Century poets most often dealt with the theme of...
You heard it on the radio.
Passive:
The ball was thrown by me. OR The ball was thrown.
Frodo is loved by Tricia.
The theme that was most dealt with by the 16th Century poets was...
Heard on the radio was a song.
Wow, those Passive examples were really boring. Basically, active keeps the reader interested because it has characters which draw you in and you know the subject and what they are doing. Passive can bore them to death because there's either something completely missing (the person performing the action) or the subject seems to be acted upon by the verb.
When you don't want to put the blame or responsibility on someone however, then use passive voice to save yourself or others from extreme embarrassment! Here are some example sentences:
Mistakes were made.
The files will be sent as soon as possible.
Active= the subject of the sentence is "acting"
Passive= the subject and target of the subject switch positions
I'm always told to write with an active voice in essay's, who knows if I've managed it. I asked a bunch of people if they knew of a way to quickly describe it to get it through a lot easier, turns out, they didn't even know there was Active vs. Passive. This obviously shows how much of a problem it is in English. *whispers* I blame the teachers.
Here's a few examples to try and help:
Active:
I threw the ball.
Tricia loves Frodo.
The 16th Century poets most often dealt with the theme of...
You heard it on the radio.
Passive:
The ball was thrown by me. OR The ball was thrown.
Frodo is loved by Tricia.
The theme that was most dealt with by the 16th Century poets was...
Heard on the radio was a song.
Wow, those Passive examples were really boring. Basically, active keeps the reader interested because it has characters which draw you in and you know the subject and what they are doing. Passive can bore them to death because there's either something completely missing (the person performing the action) or the subject seems to be acted upon by the verb.
When you don't want to put the blame or responsibility on someone however, then use passive voice to save yourself or others from extreme embarrassment! Here are some example sentences:
Mistakes were made.
The files will be sent as soon as possible.
Singular and Plural Words
The moment when you all groan because this is one of the dreaded topics. I understand, in fact I used to be there. Mostly because I grasped the concept quite easily while so many others were completely confused by it. I will help you however, as this is the point of the blog. There are two forms of words, besides the different forms they may take in different Point of Views. They are Singular and Plural.
Singular- Being the only one of its kind; dinstinctive; unique. Individual. Noting or pertaining to a member of the category of number found in many languages that indicates that word form has one referent or denotes on person, place, thing, or instance.
Plural- Consisting of, containing, or pertaining to more than one. Pertaining to or involving a plurality of persons or things. Noting or pertaining to a member of the category of number, found in many languages, indicating that a word has more than one referent.
In short, singular is the form you use when you only have one of the object in question. Plural is the form you use when you have multiple of the object in question.
Ex:
bottle-bottles
cup-cups
pencil-pencils
desk-desks
sticker-stickers
window-windows
child-children
woman-women
mouse-mice
goose-geese
Singular- Being the only one of its kind; dinstinctive; unique. Individual. Noting or pertaining to a member of the category of number found in many languages that indicates that word form has one referent or denotes on person, place, thing, or instance.
Plural- Consisting of, containing, or pertaining to more than one. Pertaining to or involving a plurality of persons or things. Noting or pertaining to a member of the category of number, found in many languages, indicating that a word has more than one referent.
In short, singular is the form you use when you only have one of the object in question. Plural is the form you use when you have multiple of the object in question.
Ex:
bottle-bottles
cup-cups
pencil-pencils
desk-desks
sticker-stickers
window-windows
child-children
woman-women
mouse-mice
goose-geese
Verbs
Verbs are the hardest part of grammar to grasp, as they can vary drastically and it's easy to become confused as to what the verb is. Though, the only time anyone has ever really needed to know what a verb is is when the teacher throws a quiz at you and tells you to label the parts of the sentence. Personally, I think if you're writing you just need to know the dictionary front to back and you're good. For those pop quiz days however, which even writers hate, it's good to know which word is the verb.
These small annoying verbs are usually actions, but as English decides to be even more confusing, they can also be in sentence which has no action at all. It is either the state of being or the action word. There is even past, present, and future tenses of each verb.
Ex:
looked (Past), look (Present), will look (Future)
Some verbs however, don't have the simple trick of adding an -ed at the end.
Ex:
saw (Past), see (Present), will see (Future)
Then there are continuous verbs in which you say:
is looking, are looking, so on and so forth.
There are also different forms for the point of view you choose to write from, as well as knowing if you are writing it in the singular or plural form, the tense even has a few things to say on this subject.
Point of View:
1st (I)
2nd (you)
3rd (he, she, it)
1st (we)
2nd (you)
3rd (they)
Singular:
1st (I)- see, hear, come
2nd (you)- see, hear, come
3rd (he, she, it)- sees, hears, comes
Plural:
1st (we)- see, hear, come
2nd (you)- see, hear, come
3rd (they)- see, hear, come
Singular-Present:
1st (I)- am, have, do
2nd (you)- are, have, do
3rd (he, she, it)- is, has, does
Singular-Past:
1st (I)- was, had, did
2nd (you)- were, had, did
3rd (he, she, it)- was, had, did
Singular-Future:
All- will be
Plural-Present:
All- are, have, do
Plural-Past:
All- were, had, did
Plural-Future:
All- will be
These small annoying verbs are usually actions, but as English decides to be even more confusing, they can also be in sentence which has no action at all. It is either the state of being or the action word. There is even past, present, and future tenses of each verb.
Ex:
looked (Past), look (Present), will look (Future)
Some verbs however, don't have the simple trick of adding an -ed at the end.
Ex:
saw (Past), see (Present), will see (Future)
Then there are continuous verbs in which you say:
is looking, are looking, so on and so forth.
There are also different forms for the point of view you choose to write from, as well as knowing if you are writing it in the singular or plural form, the tense even has a few things to say on this subject.
Point of View:
1st (I)
2nd (you)
3rd (he, she, it)
1st (we)
2nd (you)
3rd (they)
Singular:
1st (I)- see, hear, come
2nd (you)- see, hear, come
3rd (he, she, it)- sees, hears, comes
Plural:
1st (we)- see, hear, come
2nd (you)- see, hear, come
3rd (they)- see, hear, come
Singular-Present:
1st (I)- am, have, do
2nd (you)- are, have, do
3rd (he, she, it)- is, has, does
Singular-Past:
1st (I)- was, had, did
2nd (you)- were, had, did
3rd (he, she, it)- was, had, did
Singular-Future:
All- will be
Plural-Present:
All- are, have, do
Plural-Past:
All- were, had, did
Plural-Future:
All- will be
Wednesday, March 26, 2014
Point of View
Point of View- more commonly known as POV. When you write, you choose the perspective you are going to write from. First and Third person are the most popular choices for writing a book. Second person, I'll just say this, it is very strange and I don't think anyone should ever write in second person. The choice is ultimately up to you however.
Written from the main character's perspective, you cannot hear the thoughts of other characters. Everything they do is usually possessive, compared to the other characters. When you change POV's however, do not put: Lucy's POV. Honestly, if you're going to be switching between POV's every few paragraphs, I suggest writing with it not connected to any particular character. It opens up a lot of windows for writing when you want to hear the thoughts of several characters at once. If you want to switch POV's in a novel, or any story, then simply put a break and you can put their name simply (e.g. Lucy) or you can just let the reader figure it out. It's always easiest however, to break each POV into a different chapter. The same can be done with third person (e.g. Rick Riordan's series "Heroes of Olympus" is written this way).
First Person can be hard if you haven't trained yourself to write in it. I at one point wrote all my stories in First Person, but when I had to become more acquainted with Third, the skill slipped and I struggle to write in First.
Example of First Person writing:
I walked down the street, my heart pounding in my chest. What if I couldn't do this? I paused, my foot hovering into the next step. Was I wrong to think I would ever be able to tell her how I feel?
If you'll notice, the persons thoughts are in italics. This is the correct way of displaying what a person is thinking. It is not dialogue so do not put quotation marks. You can however attach dialogue tags to the thoughts, just make sure you keep in mind the character is not talking, but he/she still has emotion.
Seriously, this POV is strange and it would be weird to read a book written in it. I suggest steering clear of it all together. There is always exceptions when a person is speaking however, grammar never really seems to apply much in speech. Second Person is played out as though you are literally the main or supporting character. Which may sound cool, but after a small example, you might not be thinking so. We can feel the emotions of characters, connect to them, and feel as though we want on the adventure with them, but Second Person takes it to a completely different level.
Example of Second Person writing:
You lift your hand and strike him across the face. You can't believe he would ever be so naive to do something like this to you. Hot tears spill down your cheeks and when you speak your voice cracks.
It would be incredibly awkward to read a book written like this for 300 pages. It feels as though you are being forced into a certain situation rather than entering on a voluntary basis. You can choose to write in second person, but it's not advised.
By far the easiest to write in, in my opinion. Third person is where the story is told from a far away aspect, but close to the characters. It can be written to focus on one character alone (e.g. "Harry Potter" by J.K. Rowling) or it can be written to reflect several character POV's within a single section or chapter (e.g. "The Mortal Instruments" by Cassandra Clare). There is usually no possessiveness in context as it focus' on many people/characters.
Example of Third Person writing:
Ethan let the wooden stick fall from his hand. He couldn't believe he had just used his power to take another's life. He had known it was possible, but now he was there experiencing it-he wished he could die himself.
"What have I done?" He whispered, his knees sinking into the rocky dirt. A soft hand touched his shoulder and he could smell the soft scent of vanilla and apple. Wisps of silvery hair danced in his peripheral vision, he did not want to acknowledge her after what he had just done.
You connect to the character and can experience what he is feeling, you are not however forced into the situation. It was quite voluntary if you think about it, but it pulled at your emotions I am sure.
Be careful with what you write in the future and make sure you know which Point of View you are using to help establish your story and its characters to the fullest.
First Person
Written from the main character's perspective, you cannot hear the thoughts of other characters. Everything they do is usually possessive, compared to the other characters. When you change POV's however, do not put: Lucy's POV. Honestly, if you're going to be switching between POV's every few paragraphs, I suggest writing with it not connected to any particular character. It opens up a lot of windows for writing when you want to hear the thoughts of several characters at once. If you want to switch POV's in a novel, or any story, then simply put a break and you can put their name simply (e.g. Lucy) or you can just let the reader figure it out. It's always easiest however, to break each POV into a different chapter. The same can be done with third person (e.g. Rick Riordan's series "Heroes of Olympus" is written this way).
First Person can be hard if you haven't trained yourself to write in it. I at one point wrote all my stories in First Person, but when I had to become more acquainted with Third, the skill slipped and I struggle to write in First.
Example of First Person writing:
I walked down the street, my heart pounding in my chest. What if I couldn't do this? I paused, my foot hovering into the next step. Was I wrong to think I would ever be able to tell her how I feel?
If you'll notice, the persons thoughts are in italics. This is the correct way of displaying what a person is thinking. It is not dialogue so do not put quotation marks. You can however attach dialogue tags to the thoughts, just make sure you keep in mind the character is not talking, but he/she still has emotion.
Second Person
Seriously, this POV is strange and it would be weird to read a book written in it. I suggest steering clear of it all together. There is always exceptions when a person is speaking however, grammar never really seems to apply much in speech. Second Person is played out as though you are literally the main or supporting character. Which may sound cool, but after a small example, you might not be thinking so. We can feel the emotions of characters, connect to them, and feel as though we want on the adventure with them, but Second Person takes it to a completely different level.
Example of Second Person writing:
You lift your hand and strike him across the face. You can't believe he would ever be so naive to do something like this to you. Hot tears spill down your cheeks and when you speak your voice cracks.
It would be incredibly awkward to read a book written like this for 300 pages. It feels as though you are being forced into a certain situation rather than entering on a voluntary basis. You can choose to write in second person, but it's not advised.
Third Person
By far the easiest to write in, in my opinion. Third person is where the story is told from a far away aspect, but close to the characters. It can be written to focus on one character alone (e.g. "Harry Potter" by J.K. Rowling) or it can be written to reflect several character POV's within a single section or chapter (e.g. "The Mortal Instruments" by Cassandra Clare). There is usually no possessiveness in context as it focus' on many people/characters.
Example of Third Person writing:
Ethan let the wooden stick fall from his hand. He couldn't believe he had just used his power to take another's life. He had known it was possible, but now he was there experiencing it-he wished he could die himself.
"What have I done?" He whispered, his knees sinking into the rocky dirt. A soft hand touched his shoulder and he could smell the soft scent of vanilla and apple. Wisps of silvery hair danced in his peripheral vision, he did not want to acknowledge her after what he had just done.
You connect to the character and can experience what he is feeling, you are not however forced into the situation. It was quite voluntary if you think about it, but it pulled at your emotions I am sure.
Be careful with what you write in the future and make sure you know which Point of View you are using to help establish your story and its characters to the fullest.
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